Another Nightmare

I'd like to preface this rant with a warning, that I normally over analyze games and try to suggest ways to improve them. Honestly after what I just sat through I think it may be best to just completely start over.

There's no atmosphere, just randomly crashing from one object into the next hoping that eventually, the game will tell you something has happened and allow you to open the next door which inadvertently leads to another very basic jumpscare.

The prebuilt assets within in the game were used effectively, in the future however maybe try to include a larger focus on story and less of a focus on trying to "Gotcha" the player.

Hope this helps you improve.

I also do this for fun.

I loved playing this game. Here's a video

I know how it feels to procrastinate on a project, and then just make something for the sake of making something. I know I have several unfinished series on my channel I can't be bothered with XD But it's good you're putting yourself out there. Best of luck on future endeavors. 

I think I may have triggered a scare without seeing what happened when I walked into the kitchen. Maybe that can be looked into?

Fun little game!

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honestly you really got me!! Like a lot XD

Check out my yt video 

This game almost gave me a heart attack

Here is my video of your amazing game! :D

Interesting game, three different monsters?

I liked the jump scares, you got a couple times. Overall a nice simple short experience. Looking forward to another nightmare in the future!

Disclaimer: Contains spoilers:
To be honest, it wasn't that bad of a game! 
It was a pretty cool, short little experience with some usual trashy jumpscares but they were some jumpscares which weren't bad, especially when you opened that door to the bathroom. 
Thanks for this little experience :)
7/10

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nEPiYRonifo

this was the first game I played in this video which HAD SOME HEART STOPPING JUMPSCARES (made me scream like a baby.) thanks developer.

the game is awesome and 

https://youtu.be/PVokEEj4NKU

If your goal was to scare the sh*t out of the player, Congratulations, You Did it. ;)

Amazing short horror game!! Enjoyed it :)

here's some gameplay ;)

Truly a creepy game plus it made me jump a couple of times so props on that. I enjoyed this so much I put it in a video of mine as the first game if it's ok. Good Luck on future projects!

This at times reminds me of the random nightmares that I get, most of the time its not recurring but it hits too close to home. Loved the game and the play through put me on edge.

OMG! amazing game I enjoyed it a lot 100/100

10/10 would die of fright again

Good stuff! You made me jump. LOL Made you a lil video: 

Pretty spooky. 

Nice gameplay, the perfect to cry and play simultaneously lol xD

Loved this game perfect for content creators!

I got so scared and really enjoyed the game, truly it was incredible but my file got corrupted and I only had the webcam footage. Keep up the good work!

Checked out your game and it was short sweet and to the point! at first I thought maybe there was another game that came before this one because of how it started off but I guess you don't need one considering the title tells you that its just "Another Nightmare" lol Great game though!!

Was a really good game and really fun to play! The setting was great, and loved how the forest background mattered for the game as you go outside towards the end. The atmosphere was great; with the spooky theme in the background and the darkness and spooky mood of the house really complimented each other well and made it extra scary.
The scares were really good too; especially the one where you are exiting the room and then the camera turns 180 to show the creature that was there. I absolutely loved how the text told the player that something might be behind them and then there wasn't at first, and then a jump scare right after. This was executed really well and I thought was a superb scare and something that turned up the climax just for that part. 
Another really good part was that there were a variety of monster that wee scaring the player' most horror games have an issue of not being scary because once the monster is shown, the scariness goes away. But you have gone around that by making multiple monsters albeit with similar jump scares. I think that was done really well as well. Especially the second on which scares the player on the chair; it was photo shopped really well. 
Another good touch was when the text goes really red and large and tells the player to sleep, my only suggestion is that the speed of the text be reduced a little bit as I was only able to read it while editing the game play. But other than that, it was a great touch!
Aside from those the cinematography was done really well, and how you suggested that something might come from the cupboard at the beginning and at the end, there was a scare at the cupboard; it was a full circle and honestly thought it completed the game and made it stand out more and that much better than a lot of other games. 
My only suggestions would be to add more noises and more small scares or spooky parts. The main flaw with the game I found is that it has a great environment, and due to that, players would want to explore. This slows down the pace of the game and makes it less scary than it is. Maybe add spooky humanoid shadows or something or creepy sounds that go off now and then, that would elevate the scariness of the game a lot more and make it more enthralling and engrossing. Or maybe making the map smaller might help as it would streamline the player into only going to particular areas that have scares or spooks in them. 
Other than that, my other suggestion would be to make more of a story which the player could divulge into. Maybe talk about things like why there are monster, or why the player is having nightmares, or who are the nightmares, etc. An interesting story would make the game that much better!
And yeah, it was a great game and can't wait for more and good luck for the future!
(Also, sorry if the message looks weird, I'm writing this elsewhere and copying it into the comments. it's hard to see the writing in the page.)

Just went through it. Got some nice scares but you could have done better in a few moments. Got some good comments in the video

Bro...good fucking job...you made this game scare me. now i got nightmares...just like this one

Seriously tho...this game fuckin rocks

The game kept me on edge Keep up the good work 😀 I played it at 10:00

I am now afraid of sleeping lol would love to see more expanded on this, great work! 

Hi, I played this game on my twitch. I liked the idea of the constant threat of jumpscares since this game had a lot. The models were a bit wonky, but I understand since the weirder the look, the more foreign and creepy the environment. My only recommendation is to possibly make the story flow better and add more build-up between jumpscares. 6/10!

Solid game. I like the variety of  monsters. Could do with less jumpscares lol

A nice game with good graphic quality and jumpscares.

This Was a well made little game.  I had to change my pants tho.   Made a vid.

It was a great short horror game.

Looking forward to more content by you.

I loved this game. Was so much fun exploring the house and you did an awesome job building the tension! Followed you and will be playing your other games soon! Thanks Cody Larkin!